The first draft of the Parallel opening was shown to the rest of the class so that we could get feedback from them to find out what they liked and didn't so that we can improve upon those elements. The feedback is also useful to see problems with the movie that we didn't noticed ourselves while editing the video together and watching it through while making the first draft.
A fairly decent amount of the feedback we received was positive. The main factor about our movie that people liked were the special effects that put two of the same person on screen at the same time and this seemed to catch the attention of the rest of the class. The problems that people found with the film seemed to be consistent across the board and so are clearly the issues that must be addressed. People mainly found that the second section of the film dragged on for too long with nothing actually happening. Another issue was that some shots were a little wobbly at points and that there were a few sound issues meaning that the opening was too quiet and people couldn't hear what was happening very well.
These are a few of the feedback sheets we got for the first draft, showing scores that people gave as well as comments about certain issues they had with it. By coupling these feedback sheets with the things we know must be improved upon, we have the following list of things that must be improved.
1. Fix all of the sound issues
2. Cut the shots that have wobbles so that they are no longer there
3. Cut down the length of the walking section as this bored a lot of people
4. Change the titles so that they actually have a proper order and add effects to them
5. Add/Change the music to fit the opening in a better way
6. Move the film's name title so that it is not at the end of the opening
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